Im anti-editing. I don’t like to edit. Its my least favorite part of the writing process. I have a tendency to over edit and miss all the important stuff. I know as an English major, I should be more conscious of these things, but I’m working on it. My blogger wife has forced me to up my vocabulary game, and start to look at my work to see if I am effectively getting my point across. What good is this blog if I’m the only one who can understand it? My tthoughts should be clear, not cryptic. I’m going to start editing as I go along. I hope it’s working. My fear is that if I edit I will snatch some of that Cayenne pepper feeling out of my writing. I normally write on an emotional whim, just like I live my life. I will find a healthy balance between the two. Hopefully, the blogs that follow will be just as emotional, just as thoughtful, edited, and written as if I had taken several upper level English courses. Which I have, and passed, successfully. I know its hard to believe.
On to more pressing issues.
THE HILLS
I have always though that Spencer Pratt was a bit off. Before I thought he might like little girl twat. There was something about that beard ,that screamed dusty constructing van, timberland work boots, and penny candies. But I changed my mind, he’s not a pedophile, He is a woman beater! A master of domestic violence. Yes. Look at the signs.
1. He’s super possessive
2. He’s succeeded in isolating his victim from her family.
3. He made her give up her life. i.e. Job and apartment
4.He emotionally gut punches her on the regular.
Should I wait for the bruises or the crack pipe to surface in the routine traffic stop. I’m just saying. I’ve seen it happen trust me.
Getting Better,
KD
